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PARA REVISIÓN: Golondrinas

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by Fabiana Piceda on Sun Jul 19, 2009 7:06 pm

Mario Carvajal wrote:Hola, muy lindo poema, solucionaste la metrica pero ninguno tiene la magia del primero jejeje, me gusto mas la version 1, muy bello, un abrazo!

Gracias Mario por pasar a leerme.
También me gusta la primer versión jejeee.
Saludos cordiales